For hardhouse-freaks only

[mightyrocket]

I've created a new song, but there's something wrong with it. It sounds good, but the beat doesn't sound good. If someone has an idea how to make this better, please listen to it and tell it me. Here's the link:

http://www.geocities.com/mightyrocket2003/DJ_Mightyrocket_-_The_real_hardstyle.mp3